Week 6

Ben Koch
2020 Spring Capstone
2 min readFeb 22, 2020

The review went well on Friday. Overall, everyone liked the direction and motion of what has been animated so far with some minor feedback throughout.

Beginning:
- A question was posed on whether or not the character needed lines for the eye/nose since during the transition into the next scene you see 3 eyes which might be odd.
- Slow down the first quote “Being bored sucks” to let it sink in more.

Middle:
- The footage might need to be more diverse since there are multiple beach scenes.
- For the “default state” scene, maybe add some sort of distortion of the pixel/gradient background within the circle to represent how your brain closely examins information during this state.

End:
- Maybe bring back more use of lines near the end (this was a big maybe since there is already scene with lines near the end so that may be enough)
- The ending quote had a slightly different rag than the beginning (make it into a block of text)

I also asked about music and sound effect use, but they didn't have any feedback for me on that yet. So I’m looking forward to digging into that in the coming weeks. With all that, I think I got some solid feedback and am going to keep pushing forward with animation and tweaking scenes I’ve already made.

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