Remove the Stick From Your Ass When You Write

Your writing will drastically improve.

Carter Kilmann
Pain-Free Freelancing
4 min readFeb 19, 2021

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When you strip emotions and personality from a blog post, what do you have?

At best, you’re left with an essay. At worst? A dull textbook or instruction manual. It’s no longer a leisurely read — it’s mentally taxing to consume.

Recently, I was writing about checking accounts — a not so thrilling topic. It’s the financial equivalent of watching paint dry. But checking accounts are integral to personal finance, so I figured the topic still offered value. About halfway through my post, I realized it lacked personality. It sounded like I was explaining something to a manager or a board of executives. As if I had to maintain an air of professionalism.

My writing was rigid and uptight, limiting my post’s readability.

When I write about financial topics, my perfectionist tendencies come out. My excessively analytical internal editor thrusts himself into the process. He blows the whistle on grammar mistakes and run-on sentences. He yanks the output lever and halts production to find the best — no, the quintessential — word. Misspellings or typos? Don’t even dare.

There’s an appropriate time for my internal editor’s services: after the writing stage — not during. He’s a buzzkill, so he…

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Carter Kilmann
Pain-Free Freelancing

Corporate banking drone turned freelance writer & editor. I write about personal finance, entrepreneurship, psychology, writing, and spontaneous allegories.