Perfection Pt. I — When I Look in the Mirror
Nicolas Korch
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Overall I can say that yes we all have insecurities, and you make a solid point that we are kind of lying if we say we are not insecure. I can somehow connect with your overall idea, but are you talking of physical appearance and mental? Your introduction is not quite developed in the conclusion. I would tell you to work on wording your sentences better.