Request for Feedback: Granted
You asked for it:
Neither of us know for sure.
Unconvinced and Unpersuaded
But here’s a virtual flower anyway:
I really liked the way you expressed your request for feedback which is why I am responding.
I would suggest that you wax a little more lyrical, use more poetry, be more flowery in your language.
It’s not what I learn from books that affects me; it’s how they make me feel and the physical experience can be a big part of that.