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Kathleen Clarke Anderson
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Kathleen,

I enjoy this piece. I can see the child growing up and I feel empathy toward the speaker.

I am a little confused by the haiku. The first line feels clear, but the 3rd has me a little boggled. I am not sure I understand the “faeries delight” reference in relation to the first part of the haibun.

Nice work!

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