Adam Westbrook

Feedback #6

Hello Adam!

I didn’t think of the political stage either, but you took care of it in a very convincing manner. The wording is precise, one ‘sees’ the scene, and it’s a good read. I liked “she’s past resisting” even before I knew it’s setting up her reaction. Punching the president in effigy is a great last line for her — you should write her a show!

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