Well, it was an attempt at satire.
Thomas McIntyre
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Thank you, Thomas. That’s what I’m attempting to do now, take the punches, that is. I’m keeping at it, the key I think is always working to improve. The more critical feedback is an important component of that, and the only way to get it, I think, is to put your stuff out there.

I have some more stories that I’d be interested in hearing your thoughts on — more straight forward fiction I think, and certainly pieces that were better received. I’d be interested to hear what you think the differences are.

Of course, only if you have the time and are so inclined.

Appreciate you, Thomas! Thanks again for reading.

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