11 Haikus
Lance Pauker
1246

The titles are distracting.

I would prefer just the haiku’s with much Space between (to think). The Titles narrow them to much and it looks crowded. Or maybe pictures between Each one. (I really don’t like the titles, they make your good haiku’s bad)

I cracked up by some of them. To real man, to real.

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