This is great! I love the last two lines —
Lori A. Claxton

I’m always open to feedback :) I’m also inclined to agree with you. Sometimes I prompt myself with a thought and then drift into it, moving from from recollection to present experience, forgetting to update that initial prompting thought.

Thank you for your kind words and compliments :)

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