:) I’m glad you like this one. It’s sort of my growing up piece.

I wrote it to be read straight through, of course, but I like adding dimensions to writing, to me that’s one of the things that can be so fun about writing poetry.

If you read it like this:

stanza 1
stanza 5
2
6
3
7
4
8

You can see a sort of insight into the way I went about writing this (though your comment on line 8 makes me think you already caught this ;)