It definitely shows in your writing. I mean, I’m no expert, but I do have a grasp of how small insignificant seeming word placement and order can push buttons in the mind. Your writing is filled with those little precisions that make me smile because they really do not seem overly deliberate at all, but very natural.
It’s a bit like the difference between seeing a beautiful orchid at a florist and coming face to face with one while walking around a marsh. No one pushed it to look that way, no one sprayed it, coaxed it, or fertilized it... no one had to, it just is.
Anyway, I’m blabbering. I love your work. :)