Why does Mercury have to go to the cave? Why is the cave so dangerous? What are some rumors surrounding it? Are the witches guarding the cave good or bad? What’s the problem with Mercury’s family? And what is the Coalition?
Your story’s wonderful so far, full of surprises and suspense, which gives the readers plenty to…
Ashley Khue Pham
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Thank you so much for this feedback!! This is exactly what I’m looking for. I do think these questions will be answered as I post more passages. Please let me know your thoughts as I continue. Thank you!

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