Why don’t you write about what you did during vacation?
Santiago La Jara
12

Santiago, I loved the style with which you narrate this. It feels like a stream of consciousness done purposefully. In fact, it felt as if you were talking to me. I do think, though, that the reflection could be clearer. It seems you were saying that you didn't use your vacation well, partly because you had a lot going on in your head. But then, how could you have used your free time more purposefully to apply that "double meaning?"

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