Found poetry is a type of poetry created by taking words, phrases, and sometimes whole passages from other sources and reframing them as poetry (a literary equivalent of a collage) by making changes in spacing and lines, or by adding or deleting text, thus imparting new meaning. The resulting poem() can be defined as either treated: changed in a profound and systematic manner; or untreated: virtually unchanged from the order, syntax and meaning of the original.
**reframing them as poetry**
And what is the definition of poetry?
It literally cycles back to the fact that the line has to be presented in poetic format.
Your “poem” does not quantify as a poem.
I don’t understand why you have to be so snotty. Why not just take the criticism and actually improve? I am trying to help you. I am trying to teach you something you clearly are having trouble understanding. I am in no way trying to be mean. If you want to write poems then write them, but at least know what a poem actually is.
“On the whole, where relevant, a line is generally determined either by units of rhythm or repeating aural patterns in recitation that can also be marked by other features such as rhyme or alliteration, or by patterns of syllable-count.”
Your “poem” does not display any of those features.
Therefore it is not a poem.