Interesting, not earth shaking but interesting enough.
What I found somewhat disturbing is your picture of the woman for the lead-in. Are you advocating this mantra for women? Because you definitely focused the inner portion on male dominated events and anecdotes. To the point of lacking another image of a woman in the article itself. If you have no advice to women, and you didn’t share any, then don’t use them to drag others into your work.
Much of what you pitch is work. Work hard. At work. At work related issues. Don’t screw up the positive work with negatives. Essentially.
Not everyone wants to focus their improvements on work . Women or men. Certainly not me. Go ahead, do it. You have made good progress. Good.