Why I Am the Way I Am
Paulette Perhach
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What a lovely piece of writing, perfect for all of us who have lost and miss our Dads.

In this sentence, which is from the graf on Parris Island, stick the word ‘he’ in there after the word ‘how.’ (I can’t help it. I’m an editor.) “If you were excited go anywhere, he would talk about how just saw on the news that that very spot had just burned down.”

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