Yes! I think I need to read stories more. I love stories! And this one was good. Great!
I shouldn’t say anything else. I’ll just repeat what everyone already said — You know you’re awesome already, you know there is life in everything you write (even when it’s a one-line poem), you know………. You know everything already. And, hmmmmm I think you know I will love this too.
But, let me say it myself. I love this story. Maybe some day, I should try my hands on stories too. Maybe someday! but I really love this one here. You made me visualise many things here! A great one here again — (Dont be surprised. It’s Tre Damn it!)