Aug 28, 2017 · 1 min read
Feedback 6 The characterization of Eleanor was very interesting. Also I kind of liked that you did not yet reveal what was wrong with their marriage. But by how they were talking, I could sense that they were having problems. She assuming he will go along with her on her plans, but he is not interested.
It was a little strange to think of a priest having serious marriage problems, because if they did get married, it would be probably considered such a huge sin to even think of divorcing. Guess I don’t get to see you write yourself out of that one.
Anyway don’t have much to say for things to improve. It didn’t seem like we heard very much about Adrian though, so he could have maybe had one more line or something.
