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Boris Ba
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Feedback 8: I liked that the hammer was so important for their survival and the guy wiht the hammer wouldn’t want to give it up for anything. And I liked that the other man started to fear the guy with the hammer. So that is a good conflict I thought. On the other hand I think maybe we should have had it shown to us how the second guy was nervous by the hammer and the first guy wouldn’t want to let go of it. 
I like at the end the horde coming and the silhouette of the hammer. 
I did think that the part where the hammer wielding guy calls the other crazy, I felt like some work on dialogue could be worked on. Anyways, nice overall.

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