I love how this tells a story in addition to describing the setting so well.
marika bianca

I liked the way yours story-told, as well, marika. It reaches for an universal experience, walking on frozen snow; I’m reminded of my own experiences on shaky ground, real and figuratively speaking. And the way you use punctuation to play up the hesitation of the speaker, the fear, the letting-go — it’s really cool. I’m glad you responded to this challenge.

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