I thought
Savanna D'Amato

Reads right up until the last few lines as though it addresses a stranger. The shift to greater familiarity, even intimacy, leaves the poem lingering, leaves the reader rethinking. Movement’s definitely the thing here, Savanna D’Amato — movement in space and in mind. Great stuff.

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