Oh, so this is a hook for a serial. I guess if it was a teleplay, it would be a pilot. You’ve left too many loose ends for me. I understand that you have referred to “stories,” but this one story is not complete. I’d rather get the whole story all at once or be told up front that I’m just going to get a teaser.
I don’t know why I can’t reply to your replies like in a normal conversation. It’s annoying because it makes my comments seem disjointed but apparently this is how Medium works.