“Parallels” aka story that pulls you in mind-whirl

This comes as self promotion, but as I writer I do wish to pull you into this nutcase.
I have been writing it for a long time, and I mean — long time that sums up to couple of years now.
Idea is rounded by lingering thoughts, time and possibilities of different time, the love and pain, and eventual recovery.

I had my husband read this, and he is the overly-logical kind of person who does not really like any fantasy/mystery stuff, and there he went — reading this creation. He said he met my brain 101 and had been nicely surprised by the words that I put on paper(well, digital world paper).

So, without further ado, please feel free to start reading this story, leave comments and reviews. Even if you see it as “bad reading” — let me know flaws. All criticism is kindly accepted.

Much love, Anastasija