“A Story of A Fuck Off Find” for me is not a life lesson or an adulthood instruction. It is a story that drags since Jane Eyre and Sister Carrie—a story about vulnerability of a young woman without funds that has to prove her self-respect in a man’s eyes.
Work, Love, Save, Repeat
Yana Andriesh
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I was glued to your piece until this part. It flowed smoothly until here, it can have a conclusion that’s more connected to the rest of the piece.