Disparate Paths
Elizabeth Helmich

The level of imagery that this poem creates inside your head is unbelievable. Someday I dream that I will be able to write poems like this. You are an incredibly skilled poet . And although , as someone pointed out , there is an ache in this, it gets to the point that in caring for others we must not forget to care about ourselves and our feelings too because they matter . A truly great piece of literature