Well written — but it seems to theme itself in it’s own contradictions. It seems to profess the pursuit of equality but then announces itself as derogatory towards those who may even be seeking allegiance with your cause, while also demeaning others that may have stood beside you in their difference. It seems as though your passions are equating the concept of equality with a desire for a form of supremacy… Read it twice, and cannot see far beyond how it comes off — even when trying to force a different perspective.

Ultimately it says, “I just want to raise some hell — the need for reasons is below me.” If that is the message, you nailed it.