Hey Gavin, I found your post to be most interesting out of the recent blogs that I have read because your information taught me something I had no clue about until now. You held my attention while also staying on topic, and your conclusion was very well written. The only critique that I would make is to form an introduction to what you are going to be arguing. I felt as though there was only a middle and end in your blog post. Although, your framing and the way you tied quotes into your writing was outstanding. Overall, I would give you a gold star. Nice Work!