Are You With Us or Against Us?
Karian Tolbert
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Hey Karian, I read your post, and I agreed with your thoughts on women and their role in hip hop because I too am an African American women who understands how difficult it is to make an impact on the world without being called a stuck up bitch or a nasty slut. However, I must admit that I feel as though your post was poorly written. I say this because it is very short on information and details, not as many images as your previous post have, you do not explain exactly how this information affects me (audience) directly or indirectly , and your framing is off. Comparing this post to your previous post, I just feel as though you could have done so much more, and gotten your point across in a scholarly way.

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