INT. MIDDLE SCHOOL LOCKER ROOM— DAY
Dana Yurcisin
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Feedback. It worked. First read, before supper I didn’t see stalling so much as my second read after supper. Then, it was much more clear. Stalling…Hmm…. what more can I tell you. Let me think… I’ll be right back…someone’s at the door..

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