A Series of Dreams I Don’t Understand #1:
Personna
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Can’t say there’s much to criticize apart from the occasional misspelling. Content I can’t criticize at all, since it’s your dream anyway. Also, since this dream already happened, verbs, including modal verbs (can/will/shall, et cetera) should be in the past tense (could/would/should, et cetera).
Overall: Pretty good for a first piece. Keep at it.

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