While the rewritten version seems clearer, but also shorter, the synonyms version made the text sound weird. But not only that; picking out the right synonym turned out to be a time-consuming task, one that wasn’t as fun and challenging as rewriting.
A thesaurus that only gives you simple words
Morten Just

I love your curious mind and your posture of learning. This pattern of having an idea, building a prototype to test it, and the reviewing the results is an excellent model for innovation, and also makes great reading!

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