Thank you, Sybil!
I’ve spent so much time wishing that I could quit food! Maybe move over to an entirely shake-based diet once all is said and done. It’s easier just to cut the monster out of the picture, to quit entirely, than try to flirt on the line with it.
How I use commas in poetry and how I use them in prose are two different things. :)
In poetry, punctuation has to be taken with some poetic license. And, at least with mine, it serves the function of adding a pause. So a comma is a softer pause than a semi-colon, which is a softer pause than a period, which is a softer pause…