Anna Louise Black
Aug 27, 2017 · 1 min read

Hi Rula,

It is very evident that you spent the time to research and write this blog post; it is well articulated, well structured and educational. Each idea that you introduced was efficiently enhanced by the scholarly sources and quotes. Respectively, I was especially impressed by the manner in which you were able to introduce quite a few relevant ideas pertaining to the same topic within your blog post, including the commercialisation of evidence, voyeurism, and prejudice.

My only suggestions are to embed a few further links into the blog post to encourage the reader to explore your ideas further, and to double-check your Harvard image and quote in-text referencing. Overall, I found your blog post to be very persuasive, and was definitely effective in encouraging me to see your side of the debate.

Anna

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