Great storyline which flows with the previous chapter, and a subtle surprise which helps readers…
Ashley Khue Pham
11

Hello Ashley, thanks for your feedback, but I disagree.

The paragraph reveals how what happened in chapter 1 happened, but it also creates suspense because the characters, especially Leida, doesn’t even know what she did or that she’s capable of doing it.

Even though readers know, they only have one piece of the puzzle and have to follow her in the subsequent chapters to find out the rest.

Thanks again for the feedback.

Show your support

Clapping shows how much you appreciated Abby O. Akoto’s story.