Request for Feedback: Granted
Augusta Khalil Ibrahim

Thanks for taking the time to read, and leave some feedback. It’s not often that people respond to disagree, and even less to give critique on the writing itself! I appreciate it very much :)

Hmm, I guess a lot of the time, especially in these types of articles, I err towards being more economical with my language. I try to remove the extra, flowery language to get my point across more minimalistically, if you will. I definitely agree that (as this piece was a serenade to the book), it could have been better to put across more feeling through the word choice.

Thanks again, you’ve given me something to think about.