I write exactly as much as I need to, in order to communicate my point; but no shorter, in order to prevent misunderstanding. Complex topics deserve to be explored properly.
I am a professionally trained writer and editor. I hate bloated writing as much as you apparently do. You didn’t see the drafts which were much longer…
Hi Raph, thanks for your feedback.
It is not a quick read, true, but believe me when I tried to make it as short as possible to convey the ideas I wanted to get across. (I mean, I did put pictures in it to break up what would have been a giant wall of text — give me some credit for trying to keep the readers’ attention.)
Thanks for your response, James!
Let me address your concerns: