I like how you tried different ways to incorporate both bacon and raspberry. I thought that was very creative. Also, I like how you tried different form of raspberry (fruit and jam). I wish if you had more sketches of idea generation and if you had different placements of the images so the text will go along with the images. What if you added the bacon in the batter and baked with it? Also, what if you the picture of Very Berry Bacon cookie as full orientation in Final Idea section, so it makes a good page breaker and make it stand out compared to the rest of pictures.