Writing a Professional Email to Your Recruiters: Tips and Examples

ALI MAKEEN
3 min readJan 14, 2023

Writing a professional email to your recruiters is an important step in the job search process. It can help you stand out from other candidates and make a positive impression on the hiring manager. Here are some tips and examples to help you write a professional email to your recruiters.

  1. Use a professional email address. Avoid using personal or unprofessional email addresses like “partygirl@gmail.com” or “rockstar69@yahoo.com”. Instead, use an email address that includes your name, such as “jane.doe@gmail.com”.
  2. Use a clear and concise subject line. The subject line should be brief and informative, and should give the recipient an idea of what the email is about. For example, “Application for the Marketing Manager Position” or “Follow-up on the Sales Associate Interview”
  3. Use a professional greeting. Start the email with a formal greeting, such as “Dear [Recruiter’s Name],” or “Hello [Recruiter’s Name],”.
  4. Be specific. Be specific about the position you are applying for and the company you are applying to. Mention the job title and the company name in the email.
  5. Keep it short and sweet. Keep your email brief and to the point. Recruiters are busy and receive a lot of emails, so make sure your email is easy to read and understand.
  6. Show enthusiasm. Show the recruiter that you are excited about the opportunity and the company. Explain why you are the best fit for the position and how you can contribute to the company.
  7. Use a professional closing. End the email with a professional closing, such as “Thank you for your time and consideration” or “I look forward to the opportunity to speak with you further about this position.”
  8. Include your contact information. Include your phone number and email address at the end of the email, so the recruiter can contact you if they have any questions or want to schedule an interview.

Example:

Subject: Application for the Marketing Manager Position

Dear [Recruiter’s Name],

I am writing to apply for the Marketing Manager position at XYZ Company. I am excited about the opportunity to work with such a reputable company and I believe that my skills and experience make me the ideal candidate for the position.

As a highly motivated and results-driven marketer with 5 years of experience in the industry, I have a proven track record of developing and executing successful marketing campaigns. I am confident that my skills in data analysis, strategic planning, and team management will make a valuable contribution to the success of the marketing team at XYZ Company.

I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you further. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any questions or to schedule an interview.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,

[Your Name]

Email: [Your Email] Phone: [Your Phone Number]

By following these tips and using the example provided, you can write a professional email to your recruiters that will help you stand out from other candidates and increase your chances of getting the job.

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ALI MAKEEN

SDE & an entrepreneur with deep interest in blockchain, patterns visualization, and behavior computing.