“Inclusion” is not for outsiders
Fits and Starts

Naithan, the point you raise in your last paragraphs is compelling. I think the intriguing, defy-all-stereotypes story of your life is compelling in a completely different way. Writing-wise, I would suggest you should have distilled the life story in order to more strongly and clearly present your point on inclusion, and definitely give it some up-front preview.

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