I really like what you did here with this repetition.
Rachel B. Baxter
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Thank you so much, Rachel! Trust me, it wasn’t easy to work repeated words into the already repetitive form of the villanelle—but of course, the best content to fit the villanelle form is a poem like this one that continues to return to a single phrase, expanding the concept of the poem with each stanza.

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