Aug 22, 2017 · 1 min read
I enjoyed your piece. I enjoy the useage of space to separate ideas and let a story breathe a little for clarification. I used to abuse commas. It took years of counseling to get me to ease off. I just would put them anywhere I paused for the briefest of moments. I just remember being told over and over about my overuse. But somewhere along the line, I learned to ease up, to use them with care and it’s made all the difference in my writing.
