Nov 2 · 1 min read
San Cassimally, as I mentioned in another response, I really like this format indifference to my original. So I will not accept your apology because there isn’t a need for one and I thank you for your thoughtful editing.
Hawkeye Pete Egan B. I actually wrote this poem not too long after my friends moved out and their father died. It was all so sudden and his death hurt me most. I tried to capture my experiences and also convey the loss of someone greater through the image of their house. Just sharing. Thanks for reading always.
