Goodbye Eden — Chapter 1
C J Maybery
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Been a while since I’d read SciFi like this. Very impressive. I won’t lie, I had a bit if trouble following it at first but once I relaxed, it really started to flow. Minor spelling of the protagonist’s nickname, Gidz vs Gids. Other than that, this story reminded me of the Outer Limits, one of my favorite shows. I hope he doesn’t get evicted…😁