Writing Toast Messages

Autumn Kotsiuba
2 min readOct 18, 2022

I used to think that toasts were named after the small speech: toasting a new couple or a new year.

In reality, the term toast comes from the action of bread popping out of a toaster, just as these notifications appear. Still, I tend to think of them in terms of champagne and parties. Hey, let’s raise a glass and call attention to something worth celebrating.

Obviously toasts aren’t always a positive thing; some call attention to errors while others offer warning or instructions. Some simply let the user know that an action, like creating or copying an item, was successful. Whatever its purpose, there are a few ways to guarantee a successful (delicious?) toast.

  • Toasts, while distracting, should not be totally disruptive. They’re meant to call attention to something without blocking the rest of the screen. If it’s something the user absolutely has to know, tell it in a different way.
  • Don’t toast everything. If users constantly see the pop-ups, they’ll learn to ignore them. Classic boy crying wolf.
  • Don’t be afraid of sentence fragments. It’s better to say Note copied rather than This note was successfully copied by you. Like in most cases of UX writing, keep it short.
  • Some design systems give their toasts a header, while others have body text only. This marks the start of the…

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Autumn Kotsiuba

I’m Autumn, a Senior UX Writer from the US (based in Poland) who believes that writing is design ☕ Learn more at https://autumnkotsiuba.com.