Dewi
Dewi
Jul 25, 2017 · 1 min read

Thanks so much for taking the time to write these comments. This is very insightful, some things as a writer I can’t see myself. I shall have to reread to find that lost rhythm, which I think is when I start to wrap things up (after all it was getting quite long).

Edited : I forgot to address the ‘quote’ you had. The original idea was that the perpetrator was that cunning that she actually have designed it all along. As in she wanted him to come to her. However I didn’t want to finish the story with too much background on how it was done so it was left unclear on whether it’s a coincidence or by design. I probably should’ve mentioned something.

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