Content: the title “hope” really is the best word to describe the feeling that you portray in the poem

Structure: The number of syllables you used helped with the flow of the poem. It is also in the correct rhyme scheme and number of lines as well

Mood: The mood seems to show sadness at the beginning or a loss of hope but at the end it closes with the happier statement in the couplet.

Imagery: Imagery was very good in you poem. I think that the picture that you used was also good for giving people an idea of what they should think of when they read the poem.

Diction: I think that word choice was good and that you used a lot of strong words but the words that you used to rhyme seemed a little forced sometimes.

Rhythm: Once again, the rhyming seemed a little forced in some of the lines.

Poetic Devices: There were many metaphors that I could see and that helped a lot with elaborating the feeling of the poem.