3 Essential Editing Tips: Beta Readers

Beta Readers (Part 3)

Beth Barany
Sep 8, 2018 · 4 min read

Ezra and I are preparing for the October “Plan Your Novel” course (details here) and students are looking forward to writing their novels.

Recently some of my students write me and let me know you had questions about editing your novels, so I want to share with you three essential editing tools.


Once you’ve gotten feedback from your critique partners or editors and implemented their suggestions to the best of your ability, then what?

At this point, I turn to early readers or beta readers to let me know if they think the book is ready to be published.

I think it is, but I’m often not 100% sure. I’ve looked at the manuscript so much, I have no clarity, no objectivity.

So over the last few years I’ve acquired a list of 40+ people who I can ask to review my manuscript at this pre-publication stage.

Photo by Val Vesa on Unsplash

Win-Win

Why do they read? These early readers love to be a part of the writer’s process and a part of an exclusive group that gets to read your work before everyone else.

Beta readers also like developing a relationship with the writer and supporting the writer.

Lastly, many are writers themselves and are looking to improve their skills by reading lots of other people’s material.

We writers win because we get a fresh pair of eyes on our work. We also gather fans and people who will often post reviews when the book is published.

How to Get Beta Readers

People ask me how to get beta readers. If you’re just starting out, you may not know who your readers are nor where they congregate.

When I was self-publishing my first novel, Henrietta The Dragon Slayer (Amazon.com Kindle link), I didn’t have any beta readers. So I asked on Twitter and to friends of mine who I knew liked fantasy to be early readers for my book. I gathered at least three or four people this way.

Recently on Twitter, I posted this for my next romance:

Want to be an early reader for a new sweet/sensual #paranormalromance? Just DM me or eml me here: bethbaranyATgmail com

Also, I request via a blog post from time to time. It’s been updated to reflect our current projects.

http://www.writersfunzone.com/blog/2013/11/07/love-to-read-fiction-we-need-you-looking-for-beta-readers/

You’re welcome to sign up and adapt this type of request to your own needs.

Note on tech: I used Google Forms to create the form I embedded into this post. (I love Google Forms!)

What To Ask Beta Readers

Once I have people interested in helping me in this way, I send them a request about what kind of feedback I’d like and by when.

A Labyrinth of Love and Roses by Beth Barany (Touchstone Series #4) by Beth Barany

My letter looks like this — from my last paranormal romance novel published as A Labyrinth of Love and Roses:

Hi [name]!

Thank you so much for agreeing to give me your feedback! I so appreciate your support!

Attached is my sweet paranormal romance novella in draft format, GREEN MAN (Working Title), in Word format, as requested. Let me know if that format works for you.

[I find out ahead of time which format they’d like.]

It’s just over 23,000 words so if you could get it back to me next week by Sunday, August 24, that would be great.

Here’s what I would like you to answer: (Short answers are fine.)

1. At what point does the motivation or the actions of the characters seem unrealistic?
2. Where does the story get boring?
3. What was missing? What did you want more of?
4. What would make this a five-star story for you?
5. Did you feel attached to the characters?
6. [Optional] Any line edits, like typos and grammar, would be great!

Thank you for your honesty. I would rather learn that my story doesn’t work now than learn that it sucks from Amazon reviewers. And I don’t take constructive criticism personally.

Thanks again! And have a great week!

All my best,

[your name]

Things to keep in mind:

That’s the process both Ezra Barany (my husband, a thriller writer) and I use to gather and work with our beta readers.

Working with beta readers is a win-win for us all.

Good luck!

YOUR TURN

What is your next step, either with editing or getting beta readers?

Comment and let me know. I’m always interested in hearing from you!

All my best,

Beth

PS. Part 1 is here. Part 2 is here.

PPS. If you’d like to talk to a writer’s coach about help with your editing, learn more about that here.


If you’d like a home study/self-paced course on how to get beta readers, I’ve created one! You can check that out here: https://school.bethbarany.com/p/how-to-get-book-reviews-course


My gift to you: Writer Discovery Mini-Course: http://bethb.net/discover

Delivered by email, this 5-day mini-course is designed to bring you clarity and inspiration to your writer’s life. It’s a deceptively simple course, but writers have told me that answering these 5 questions has been extremely helpful, enlightening, and even fun. Enjoy!

Beth Barany

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Science Fiction/Fantasy author. Award-winning novelist. Founder: Barany School of Fiction. Free class: https://writersfunzone.com/blog/discoverycourse.

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