… a layered and well paced sentence will make me weep the soft, relieved, tears of a person finally and exactly heard across time and cultures.
Which is exactly what that sentence is for your readers. The sentence itself is an example of what it describes. Nice.
I had to highlight I cried when I watched Dead Poets’ Society, because DPS is the best movie ever, ever, ever. RIP Robin Williams, you genius.
I highlighted lots of gorgeous sentences. You should write poetry, Sass, really.