Jakab you are going to have to try a little bit harder, I know the guy said 2pence per word and a penny per click-thru but repeating the words on the brief over and over with only slight changes just doesn’t cut the mustard.

We need a decent back story to lure us in, some meat in the middle and a finish that makes me cry for more.

Jimmy stared vacantly at his keyboard searching for inspiration, his report was due in two hours and he had nothing, the client wasn’t going to be happy.

Inspiration is what I need he thought as he held his head in his hands, or coffee, that might do it.

Jimmy looked at his coffee machine still full of stale cold coffee, by the time he had cleaned it and made a fresh pot the deadline would be past and Jimmy would be broke.

Then Jimmy remembered that Alice, his sometime girlfriend, had given him a one cup pot and sprang into action.

Twenty minutes later Jimmy pressed ‘send’ on the best pitch in his life and drained the last of his cup.

You too can be part of Jimmy’s story, just click the link ___

Jakab (probably not your real name) I know you are a spammer trying to make a buck but you should read some of the excellent ideas about marketing and selling that are given freely on the Medium site.