It certainly read like a novel. The storyline knew exactly where it was going, and how it would get there.
Back in the day… Okay, WAY back in the day, there used to be serial-based mysteries on radio. Every week you received a snippet more of the story, and each week there was a miniature cliffhanger that would keep your interest piqued until the following week.
That’s what your story reminded me of. It’s a lost art form very well suited to the writing experiment you just concluded.
I’m not familiar with your genre of writing, I’m not even sure I could classify it, but it seems as though there should be a publisher or two out there somewhere interested in the completed manuscript.
Look around for publishers in whatever genre you feel that you write in, and see if any are accepting submissions.
Who knows, you may be surprised at the response!